2009年高考书面表达解析【全国卷Ⅰ和II】
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2009全国卷I/海南、宁夏】

假定你是李华,正在英国接受英语培训,住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs Wilson 不在家,你准备外出,请给Mrs Wilson 写一留言条,内容包括:

1.外出购物

2.替房东还书

3Tracy 来电话留言:

1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消

2)此事已告知Susan

3) 尽快回电

注意:

1. 词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

 

Mrs Wilson,

                                                                                         

Li Hua

【参考答案】

Mrs Wilson,

I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.

Li Hua

【解析】

作文题仍然同去年一样,属于提纲式要点作文,要求学生就所给内容写一张留言条,是学生比较熟悉的题材,体现了英语学习应该注意实用性,生活型的原则。应注意下面几点:1)注意人称,应该用第一人称的形式给房东(第二人称)写便条;2)注意时态的正确使用:从试题的内容上可以看出在表达要点12时应用将来时;而要点3中的几个方面则需要注意时态的替换,会用到一般过去时,现在时和将来时。3)注意恰当使用逻辑词语,是各个要点间逻辑连贯,行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译,而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句,因此要仔细组织语言,合理安排结构。在语言方面,要特别注意简洁明了,开头要开门见山。

 

2009全国卷II

假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Sarah 打算暑期来北京旅游,来信询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写封回信,简单介绍以下内容:

1.  简况:长800余米、600多年历史、300余家商铺;

2.  位置:天安门广场南面;

3.  交通:公共汽车176959等路,地铁2号线;

4.  特色:步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。

参考词汇:步行街 pedestrian street;当当车 trolley car;地铁 subway

注意:

1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3. 开头语已为你写好,请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。

Dear Sarah.

Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street. Here is something about it.

 

【参考答案】

Dear Sarah,

Thank you for your letter for asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street. Here is something about it.

Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old. Along this 800-meter street, there are more than 300 shops. As the street is in the center of Beijing, just to the south of Tian’anmen Square, it’s very convenient to get there by bus. You may take Buses No. 17, 69 or 59. Subway Line 2 has a stop there too. Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street, but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops, but also to chatters and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life. I’m sure you‘ll like it.

【解析】

本文是书信格式,给出四个要点,属于常规文体,学生只要把四个要点写全,注意上下文,句与句之间的合理过渡即可。

 

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