[图文]图表写作技巧及实例
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图表写作技巧及实例
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     图表式书面表达题常以曲线图形式、流程图形式、柱形图形式、饼式图形式、数据表格形式及平面图形式出现。

    特点:文字少,信息简洁,要点分散等。

    困难:如果只是把图表中的内容一点一点地写出来,进行清单式的罗列,就会索然乏味,并且达不到字数的要求。

    技巧:首先要根据图表前的文字说明弄清楚图表的性质、内容、规律,并做到以下几点:

    1.细读图表,抓住特征。首先要读懂其中的符号和数字所代表的意思,然后抓住主要特点,弄懂它们所揭示的规律。常用词汇:From the table/chart/figure/graph we can see that

    2.认真审题,确定主题。认真审读试题所提供的数据信息,结合文字提示确定短文的主题。

    3.巧用数据,突出主题。引用数据说明基本趋势,比较数据揭示基本特征。写作时要巧妙地引用一些数据来说明主题,不要做任何发挥。常用词汇:increase, decrease, rise, drop, while, on the contrary, compareto/with, the same as, be similar to, be different from, more than, less than等。

    4.词句多变,表达灵活。由于图表数据比较单调,很容易使人使用相同的词语和句式进行表达,结果文章显得很乏味。因此,写作时要尽量避免重复使用同一词语或巨型,选择一些异曲同工的词语和句式来表达。

    5.适当发挥,表明观点。有时题目要求考生在对数据进行分析、对比后,简单地谈谈自己的看法或提出建议,这属于让考生自主发挥的部分。借题发挥时,不可偏离主题,只要把观点表述清楚即可,不必作更多的解释或说明。常用词汇:in a word, in short, generally speaking, Its clear from the chart that , We can draw the conclusion that …等。

    One possible version:

     From the table, we can see that film is giving way to TV. For example, in 1992, there were less than 10 thousand TV watchers, more than 80 thousand film goers, while in 2002, we had about 1 million TV watchers but only about 10 thousand film goers. The number of film goers is decreasing and that of TV watchers is increasing.

    Televisions are quite common nowadays and so more and more people turn to TV because it is convenient and cheap and watchers have a wide rang of programs for them to choose from. At the same time, there are still some people who prefer films because they like the atmosphere in the cinema as well as the entertainment.

由于图表作文是考查学生从非文字材料中获取信息、分析问题和解决问题的综合能力,较之于其他类型,其难度更大,考生的成绩与其它类作文题型相比更不理想。

动笔前,考生要仔细阅读标题和要求。同一张图表,如果命题要求不同,考生观察、分析问题的角度也不同,写出的文章内容也就完全不同。另外,考生要仔细分析图表,尽可能正确理解图表的真正含义,只有在对图表完全理解的基础上,才能对其进行分析、比较,从中总结规律,得出结论。

    图表作文常用词汇

    rise and fallratevary withvary from...toincrease by...%;drop by...%;the previous ratesteep rise ofsteady decreasedeclinethe latest statistics showgetting steadily smallera shift away from...to figure indicate...

    图表类作文的常用句型

    1.图表总体描述句型

   1 As the graph(曲线图) depicts,              .

    As the graph depicts, some changes have taken place in the past five years.

    As the graph depicts, more and more people begin to pay attention to nutrition in their diet.

   2The table(表,一览表) indicates that ________________.

    The table indicates that a great change will certainly be initiated in the world’s communications.

    The table indicates that the smoking population decreased gradually in recent years.

    2.描述数量的变化的句型

   1X increase/decrease       times.

    The income of the people from this region increased 3 times.

   2X increase/decrease by          .

    The output of July in this factory increased by 15 compared with that of January

    3.描述相似与不同的句型

   1X is similar to Y in_____.

   2X and Y are similar/alike in        .

    The two regions are alike in the weather condition.

    The two universities are similar in their regulation.

    图表类模板

    模板1

    1A deeper study of the data, as shown in the graph, can help derive from it much food for thought. 2According to my own lights, one insight gleaned from the changes is that ___________ .3__________. 4 Another insight/truth obtained from the data is that______________.  5_______________.

    第一句话的意思是仔细研究图表所示的资料,可以使我们思考很多。第二和第四两句提出作者领悟到的两个意义。第三和第五两句是对这两个意义的进一步说明。

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A closer study of the data, as shown in the table, can help derive from them much food for thought. According to my own lights, one truth gleaned from the changes is that the manpower plays a less important role in modern wars than it used to. In the past, the outcome of a warfare would be determined by the superiority of manpower; but in modern wars, the dominating position of manpower is greatly weakened.

    Another truth obtained from the data is that conventional weapons have given way to high-tech weapons as the latter assume more and more powerful role. The Gulf War of 1991 is a case in point. Although Iraq is superior in the number of conventional weapons to USA and its allies, end in defeat.

    模板2

    1In the graph, the statistics are quite clear: _________________. 2And according to the figures, we know ___________________. 3It can also be easily seen that _________.

    在本模板中,第一句阐述图表概况,第二句剖析图表所揭示的第一个意义,第三句剖析图表所揭示的第二个意义。

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    In the graph, the statistics are quite clear: nearly 200 billion dollars are lost in tobacco every year. And according to the figures, we know smoking can destroy the smoker’s health as well as people around him. It can also be easily seen that smokers are hardly longevous(长寿的) and as many as 3,000,000 people die of smoking every year.

    [Task One]

    Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: People Use  of the Web. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline and the graph below.

1) 人们上网主要是为了------

2) 分析原因

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


    The chart presents a picture of different purposes of the people in Beijing surfing the net in the year of 2004.

     The two outstanding figures, which stand for people’s browsing and entertainment respectively demonstrate clearly that many people used the Web mainly for browsing and entertainment. In contrast, the percentage of the people who use the net to do research is only 17%. The people using the Web for shopping account for only about 13%.

What is the reason for this uneven distribution? On one hand, the high percentage of the first two kinds of people is due to the fact that the web is filled with the latest news and updated entertainment materials of various kinds, which can bring people knowledge and relaxation. On the other hand, a lack of trust in the information on the Web leads to people’s reluctance to make Web-based research and purchases in spite of the convenience.

[Task Two]

The pie charts below show the market share of some leading sportswear manufactures. Using the information from the charts, write a report of 120-140 words summarzing the changes in sales that occurred for each manufacturer between 1999 and 2001.

Market share (%)

1. MERCURY     2. SPRING    3. OASIS    4. TILA

 

 

 

 

 


      

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


      

Report on Changes in Market Share

    Among the four sportswear manufacturers, Mercury had the biggest market share in 1999, which, however, fell to 30% in 2000 and remained at that level in 2001.

The market share of Tila rose from 30% in 1999 to 35% in both 2000 and 2001, outstripping Mercury as the largest manufacturer in these years. Oasis market share amounted to 20% in 1999, dropped to 10% the next year, but recovered to 15% in 2001

   Compared with the other three manufacturers, Spring showed the highest growth rate, seeing its market share jump from 10% in 1999 to 25% in 2000. On the other hand, in 2001 Springs market share decreased slightly to 20%.

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