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高考短文改错【公开课】
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高考短文改错其实就是找出所给文章中句子与正确表述间的区别并加以改正。这种工作和我们平时玩的大家一起来找茬还有找你妹十分相似哦!

命题特征
选材:
多为记叙文/应用文(110
贴近生活
简单句+ 复合句

错误类型:
词法(动词、名词、形容词、代词、数词、介词、连词、助词、副词)
句法
搭配


难度:
平稳
面广(题材多为记叙文、应用文,因此涉及面十分广泛)
长度(20——大概20个句子,包含简单句、复杂句、并列句等。


答题说明及答题规范
10 + 10——10
分对应10个错误
增加(1~2——需要增加内容的有12
删除(1~2——需去除内容的12
修改(6~8——需修改内容的68
PS
:每处错误及修改均仅限一词
只能修改10处,第11处起不计分


问题及原因
看似简单,实则头疼
基础不扎实
缺乏总结

典型错误——动词形式

错误类型——动词形式时态语态、主谓一致、动词搭配,如:

1.Then the trouble started. We cannot open the door. So we asked the policeman for help.(时态不一致,改为couldn't


2.Tom told me that he has just been asked what he was doing during the holidays.
(时态不一致,改为had


3. An English lady was finally decided that she really should learn to drive.
(去掉was)


4. After hearing your sad stories, he will say some words that is nice and warm.(
主谓不一致,改为are


5. I became interested in biology and chose to learn biology when I enteredinto the college.
(搭配问题,去掉into

典型错误——非谓语
错误类型——非谓语形式错误、不定式to遗漏或多用、非谓语与谓语混淆。如:

1.I also shared with my friends many photos taking in Beijing.
2.On the box was a card said: “25 cents.”
3.He had time for a proper breakfast and was still the first reach the factory.

典型错误——名词形式

常见错误类型
·
可数/不可数
·
可数名词单复数
·
名词的格
1.Christie was one of my best 
friend at high school.   friends
2.Tom was having much 
troubles getting up in the morning.   trouble
3.I was playing at my 
cousin house.   cousin’s

 

典型错误——形容词、副词

常见错误类型
·
词性
·
比较级/最高级


1.Whenever I think of the old days, I feel very happily.  
happy

2.Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home.   Unfortunately

3.Another way is to watch our everyday use of water and electric at home.   electricity

 

典型错误——介词

常见错误类型
·
遗漏或是多用
·
搭配


1.I plan to visit the Great Wall in next month.  
(去掉in

2.I rushed out || the house as quickly as I could.   (加of

3.It is necessary to decide what is worth taking notice ||.   (加of

典型错误——冠词

常见错误类型

·定冠词/不定冠词混淆
·
遗漏或多用
·
搭配

1.The poet and a professor is going to give us a talk.   (去掉 a

2.Three months later, Tom was elected the monitor of our class.   (去掉 the

3.I forgot to buy a MP3 during the Spring Festival.   (改为 an

典型错误——代词

常见错误类型

·形式错误

1.They are dishonest in order to get better results to please his parents and teachers.   (改为their
2.I wanted to blame the old man, but I controlled me at last.  
(改为 myself
3.I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.  
(改为 mine

 

典型错误——句法

常见错误类型

·句式理解不充分
·
连接词掌握不扎实
·
句义理解不通透

1.Try harder,  || you will have confidence.   (加 and

2.Child although he was, he looked quite calm in that difficult situation.   (改为 as

3.When he had been admitted by Beijing University made us very happy.   (改为 That

4. Everyone agreed to his suggestion which we should hold a meeting to talk about the problem.   (改为that

5. Katia will introduce me to some of her friends, one of who has been to China several times.   (改为 whom

历年真题分析
Passage 1 (2013
课标)

The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in

the early 1800’s. Have tea inthe late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and 

dinner, that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night. This custom soonbecomes another 

meal of || day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器)industry. Tea in

China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular In Britain, 

there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for 

the grow in the porcelain industry.

1、去掉 of

2Have——Having

3that——which

4becomes——became

5、加 the

6Interesting——Interestingly

7by——with/to

8drunk——drank

9cup——cups

10grow——growth

Passage 2 (2014•全国新课标II)
My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning

and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time

with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports

for one hour everyday.

My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the

classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening || music. The teachers

here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.

1They——There

2didn't——don't

3many——much

4with——for

5hour——hours

6look——looks

7、去掉 the

8sat——sit

9、加 to

10helpfully——helpful

Passage 3 2014•全国新课标I
Nearly five years before,and with the help by our father,my sister and I planted some cherry

tomatoes(圣女果) in our backgarden. Since then for all these year we hadbeen allowing tomatoes to

self-seed where they please. As || result, the plants are growingsomewhere. The fruits are small in size,

but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we

allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or

insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!

1before——ago

2by——of

3year——years

4had——has

5、加 a

6somewhere——everywhere

7taste——tasty

8much——many

9、去掉 but

10wonderfully——wonderful

模拟预测

In recent years, studying abroad has been popular. Many students are trying his best to go

abroad. There are many advantages in attending schools in abroad. First, students || study abroad can

make friend with people of different cultures. Second, they can learn manymore advanced

knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries. Third,they can learn foreign language

more quickly .But mostly of the students are so young to live by themselves without any living

experience. However,be far away from their motherland, they may feel lonely and homesick.

1his——their

2、去掉 in

3、加 who

4friend——friends

5many——much

6language——languages

7mostly——most

8so——too 

9However——Besides

10be——being

 

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