参考答案

【书面表达1】

Very often you come across an empty classroom with the lights still on. It’s not difficult to find evidence of wasting water, a very serious problem. Additionally, students do not recycle enough, throwing away the soft drink bottles, used exercise papers and books. Worse still, many students still use non-environmentally friendly lunch boxes, causing the White Pollution.

These things show that many students lack the sense of environmental awareness. It’s important to educate students to be more environmentally friendly. At the same time, students can do small things, such as collecting used items for recycling, turning off the lights, saving water. Always remember that it’s everyone’s responsibility to protect the environment.

【书面表达2】

Dear Tom,

With the coming of the college entrance examinations, all the students should make a choice.

What university should they choose to study in? what major should they study in university? We will also be faced with the same problem in year, so it brings a heated discussion among us students.

Some students think that it is better to rely on teachers or parents because they are more experienced. On the contrary, some other students think now they are already grown – ups, so they can decide everything for themselves. Besides, they agree that parents and teachers may have the ideas that may be out of date.

As far as I’m concerned, I think teachers and parents have more life experience. Also what they do will obviously benefit us. In a word, as students, we should take teachers and parents’ advice.

Look forward to your reply!

                                                             Yours sincerely,

                                                      Li Hua

【书面表达3】

      The author shares his/her sucessful experience of learning English. The method inculdes listening to tapes and imitating the speakers, reciting classic essays and choosing proper learning materials such as Crazy English.

       From my point of view, if you are not motivated to learn English you will become frustrated and give up, so firstly you must know why you learn English. And secondly remember that learning a language is a gradual process - it does not happen overnight. You must be patient with yourself.What’s more important,  make learning a habit. That is ,try to learn something every day. It is much better to study (or read, or listen to English news, etc.) 10 minutes each day than to study for 2 hours once a week. At last, Use the Internet properly. The Internet is the most exciting, unlimited English resource that anyone could imagine and it is right at your finger tips.

       If you can stick to it, I’m sure you’ll be a successful English learner.

【书面表达4】

Located in the middle of Guangdong province, Guangzhou, the capital of Guangdong, is an ancient city with a cultural history of 2200 years. It covers a total area of 743, 4 square kilometers with a population of 10 million. Because it is warm and flowery all the seasons, it is also called “Flower City” and “Five Goats” is the symbol of it. Since 1982, Guangzhou was named as one of the first historical and cultural cities. The special character of Guangzhou is attracting more and more tourists from all over the world.

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求写一篇介绍家乡广州的短文。写作要点包括：广州的地理位置、人口、历史、气候等。要求句子结构要正确，不能出现语法错误；包含所有信息，使作文保持与语意连贯。

亮点说明：

范文使用了非谓语动词Located in the middle of Guangdong province；with复合结构with a cultural history of 2200 years；原因状语从句Because it is warm and flowery all the seasons等语法知识，使作文句式多样，层次清晰；范文使用了was named as，all over the world等短语，使表达更生动、形象。

考点：材料类作文

【书面表达5】

Dear Bob，

It's very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng.

   The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and roads have been built. More schools and hospitals are available for its people. However, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. In my opinion, Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically. I would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under control so that we'll have a better hometown in future.

Yours，

Xiaohua

【解析】

这篇书面表达主要结合要点来写，首先介绍家乡江城的自然情况：The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in.这里的stand表示位于，不定式to live in做定语修饰a beautiful place。然后介绍江城的成就，Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and roads have been built. 这句话中的时态很重要，用现在完成式。More schools and hospitals are available for its people.这里的be available for是“可以获得的”。表达存在问题时，要注意用表示转折的词，像however，such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours.举例说明这里用了such as。最后是对江城发展的看法，让考生自己发挥，就要看考生的思维和表达能力了，用In my opinion,引出自己的观点，I would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under control so that we'll have a better hometown in future.这句话里面用了be brought under control“控制住….”，so that引导的是目的状语从句。都是很值得学习的。