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【书面表达1】

Dear Mr. Brown,

I’d like to introduce my friend to you, Mr. Li Ming, who is going to apply for a position with your firm. He graduated from college three years ago and since then he has worked as a lawyer. He is good at English and knows some Japanese and German. He works hard and is careful in everything he does. He is honest, kind and easy to get on with. He was born on August 21st, 1980 in Qidong, Jiangsu Province, China. He is married and lives at No 148 Renmin Road, Qidong city. His telephone number is 0513-83335550. He shows great interest in your firm. If he is accepted, he will do his best. I’m sure he will be fit for the position. I’m looking forward to your early reply.

                                                         Yours,

                                                              Wang Lin

【书面表达2】

Should Students Make Friends Online?

Whatever your age is, the Internet is a great place to hang out, where you can not only have fun but also make friends.

The Internet helps students make as many friends as they want easily. Chatting online, students can express their feelings and opinions more freely. Thus they can also ease their anxiety from their studies. Some students even get help with their foreign language studies.

However, each coin has two sides. Making friends online can no doubt waste much of students’ precious time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students sometimes get cheated online.

In my opinion, students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.

【解析】

试题分析：考查半开放性作文。本文的话题是“Should students make friends online?”上网的优点和缺点。优点方面可以从在网上可以获取有用的信息，和世界各地的人保持联系，可以自由发表个人的观点等方面展开；缺点可以从网络安全性，以及网络游戏上瘾等方面进行展开。写作时需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

考点：考查半开放性作文写作

点评：半开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

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Chairman Xi called on the whole society to build China into a saving country last year. As a student, I think we should do something in answer to his call. We can’t do something great but we may do something closely connected with our life. At first, we’d better not waste money on too much junk food such as ice cream, soft drinks or bread. It’s unnecessary for us to pay much attention to dressing, which will cost our parents’ much money. We must learn to save electricity and water. Whenever we leave our classrooms, we must turn off the lights and don’t turn them on in the day time. It’s a bad habit to leave the water flowing all the time. Everyone should remember to turn off the taps after using water. Although we have to buy some pens, pencils, notebooks and some other things for study, we mustn’t waste them. If everyone does a bit, we may help a lot in the project organized by Chairman Xi

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【书面表达4】

We all want to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal we must do several things.

Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times. We should be brave in front of difficulties. secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power.If we have the power,we can help to build our country and enjoy life better.In order to study well,we need to do sports so that we can keep fit.We can go running ,play ball games or simply take a walk after a day’s study.If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.

【解析】

试题分析：本文较为简单，是关于健康成长的短文，要点很简单，留给考生发挥的余地较大，考生可以根据自己的个人感受做适当的发挥。在写作的时候，要使用合适的连接词firstly, secondly来连接全文。也要使用高级的词汇如consist of等提高文章的文采。

考点：考查半开放性作文

点评：本文的话题较为简单，要求也不高。考生可以从心理和生理的健康发展两个方面着手，培养乐观的人生态度，参加体育锻炼，增强体质。在写作的时候要运用多种句型让文章充满变化，提升文章的层次。

【书面表达5】

Good afternoon, everyone! it’s a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today. The topic of my speech is “Thank you, mum”

Like many of you, my life has been blessed with a mother who is a source of unconditional love. My mum is an ordinary housewife. I highly appreciate her kind consideration, especially during the stressful days. In these days, she keeps me company, cooks me tasty dinners, and makes my room as clean as possible. On top of that, whenever I get upset, she listens to me and comforts me until I have cheered up. I’m fortunate to have such a caring mother. 

Listen, time is pressing. The big exam is there for me and you, every son and daughter, to realize dreams. I appeal to all of us here to work hard for our mums. I have another message for everyone here; Express your love in return. Either a small talk with mum or a cup of tea for her and her face will light up. Thank you for listening.

【解析】

试题分析：本书面表达是要求学生写“感恩”为话题的演讲稿，是一篇典型的提纲作文，在写作之前要注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。

【亮点说明】

文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如be blessed with，keep sb. company，as … as possible，on top of that, cheer up，be fortunate to do，realize dreams， appeal to，light up；还运用高级词汇appreciate，unconditional等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：whenever等等。

考点：提纲作文

【书面表达6】不唯一

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇书信类作文，要点和信的开头结尾已经给出.我们所要做的就是用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较简略,故需要自由发挥的地方较多.需要注意不要偏离文章中心.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头结尾,不能出现文章脱节问题.尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

考点：书信类作文